Comments on: Manning: ‘man up’ to Super Bowl loss http://theloquitur.com/2010/02/15/perspectives-peyton-manning/ Cabrini College newspaper Tue, 27 Apr 2010 18:24:15 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Megan Kutulis http://theloquitur.com/2010/02/15/perspectives-peyton-manning/comment-page-1/#comment-47 Megan Kutulis Mon, 15 Feb 2010 12:27:14 +0000 http://loquitur.webfactional.com/?p=393#comment-47 Super Bowl is spelled wrong. Two words. Super Bowl is spelled wrong. Two words.

]]> By: Jerry Zurek http://theloquitur.com/2010/02/15/perspectives-peyton-manning/comment-page-1/#comment-45 Jerry Zurek Sun, 14 Feb 2010 21:14:57 +0000 http://loquitur.webfactional.com/?p=393#comment-45 -DD20: 11 minute span -Two commas needed around Peyton's name because you are addressing him. (I put them in already: Yes, Peyton, your performance -their dues = the way it is said is "their due" -fix number: for ten minutes -2 sentences: losers, there shouldn’t be -Let’s be serious right now Peyton, along with that lovely 14 million dollar salary there will be losses and wins. Should be: Let’s be serious right now, Peyton. Along with that lovely $14 million salary there will be losses and wins. - -DD20: 11 minute span

-Two commas needed around Peyton’s name because you are addressing him. (I put them in already: Yes, Peyton, your performance

-their dues = the way it is said is “their due”

-fix number: for ten minutes

-2 sentences: losers, there shouldn’t be

-Let’s be serious right now Peyton, along with that lovely 14 million dollar salary there will be losses and wins. Should be: Let’s be serious right now, Peyton. Along with that lovely $14 million salary there will be losses and wins.

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